DAY IN THE LIFE #1 - UNLUCKY

Don't talk so quietly and don't use that music

Not good videos. Can't hear what you're saying and when you can we can't understand you because you don't speak clearly.

The music is annoying and the GoPro footage doesn't make the video any better.

The editing isn't that bad, but you gotta talk louder and more clearly.

MaximusBikes wrote:

Not good videos. Can't hear what you're saying and when you can we can't understand you because you don't speak clearly.

The ...more

MaximusBikes wrote:

Not good videos. Can't hear what you're saying and when you can we can't understand you because you don't speak clearly.

The music is annoying and the GoPro footage doesn't make the video any better.

The editing isn't that bad, but you gotta talk louder and more clearly.

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Please no dubstep in bmx videos, and I couldn't get more than a minute in because I couldn't hear anything and the camera was shaking so bad

I watched the entire video because I know the struggle of starting a channel and needing tons of feedback and improvement. If you watch my old videos from like 2014, they're pretty funny but the filming is dog shit and the riding isn't that great either.

First thing, get your friend off of that scooter and onto a bike.

My first thought was the filming and the music were bad. That area needs some improvement. You can have music in your intro but not throughout the whole video.

You also need to try to speak louder when you are filming and try to look at the camera as much as possible. I know that when you're holding a camera and you're talking to it, it's really easy to go 100% ADHD and start looking all around you but you need to try not to do that as much as possible.

The editing in the video was okay. I understand that it is a Day In The Life and it's supposed to show the viewer everything but there were a few instances in that video where nothing was going on, you were just holding the camera. That kind of made the video bland and boring. All you have to do is chop and trim the video and that problem is eliminated.

The time lapse was really cool but I think it went on for too long.

Overall, it needs some work but you can do it. The riding was pretty good considering your age. (You seemed younger than I am and I am one of the younger ones on this site.) Just don't put that music all throughout the video, work on the filming, work on the editing, and you'll be fine.

Stocksy wrote:

I watched the entire video because I know the struggle of starting a channel and needing tons of feedback and improvement. If ...more

Stocksy wrote:

I watched the entire video because I know the struggle of starting a channel and needing tons of feedback and improvement. If you watch my old videos from like 2014, they're pretty funny but the filming is dog shit and the riding isn't that great either.

First thing, get your friend off of that scooter and onto a bike.

My first thought was the filming and the music were bad. That area needs some improvement. You can have music in your intro but not throughout the whole video.

You also need to try to speak louder when you are filming and try to look at the camera as much as possible. I know that when you're holding a camera and you're talking to it, it's really easy to go 100% ADHD and start looking all around you but you need to try not to do that as much as possible.

The editing in the video was okay. I understand that it is a Day In The Life and it's supposed to show the viewer everything but there were a few instances in that video where nothing was going on, you were just holding the camera. That kind of made the video bland and boring. All you have to do is chop and trim the video and that problem is eliminated.

The time lapse was really cool but I think it went on for too long.

Overall, it needs some work but you can do it. The riding was pretty good considering your age. (You seemed younger than I am and I am one of the younger ones on this site.) Just don't put that music all throughout the video, work on the filming, work on the editing, and you'll be fine.

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thanks so much i will do those things