2014 Rewind edit

The riding is really cool but i just don't like the way you had edited that, there is just (good) clips randomly placed here and there on a music and that's all. I mean... we are lost when we watch your video, there is no ryhtm, you should "sequence" more your next footage with for example, a more tech street part to begin, then some big runs in a park/bowl/trail (something more aerial), then go back to street or anything you want but keep some big clips for the final of your video (also think to add a little intro).

That's what i think, maybe it could looks negative but you got really good clips, and a bad editing can ruin them (or at the least don't put them enough in value), music is also a good way to dynamise an edit, with transitions stalled with a bass, or simply follow the music rythm with a more energic riding when the song start to upseting (thing than you cannot do, with th song you choose, because it's too...linear).

And afterall, I repeat myself, GOOD RIDING !! =)

Francky wrote:

The riding is really cool but i just don't like the way you had edited that, there is just (good) clips randomly placed here ...more

Francky wrote:

The riding is really cool but i just don't like the way you had edited that, there is just (good) clips randomly placed here and there on a music and that's all. I mean... we are lost when we watch your video, there is no ryhtm, you should "sequence" more your next footage with for example, a more tech street part to begin, then some big runs in a park/bowl/trail (something more aerial), then go back to street or anything you want but keep some big clips for the final of your video (also think to add a little intro).

That's what i think, maybe it could looks negative but you got really good clips, and a bad editing can ruin them (or at the least don't put them enough in value), music is also a good way to dynamise an edit, with transitions stalled with a bass, or simply follow the music rythm with a more energic riding when the song start to upseting (thing than you cannot do, with th song you choose, because it's too...linear).

And afterall, I repeat myself, GOOD RIDING !! =)

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Appreciate the constructive criticism for sure, but it's also just an iPhone edit haha. But I see what you mean. Whenever I film clips with an iPhone, they're usually just 1 thing, not a line. I feel like lines would be easier to transition into an edit better.

I kinda just wanted them spread out instead of doing a few street clips, then a bunch of park clips, then street, etc. cause I always do that in other edits I've made & it just feels weird having street clips, then ALL the park clips, then finish it off with some street. I thought I'd switch it up this time and just mix it around but I guess that was a bad choice haha.


music is also a good way to dynamise an edit, with transitions stalled with a bass, or simply follow the music rythm with a more energic riding when the song start to upseting (thing than you cannot do, with th song you choose, because it's too...linear

That's what I did in the beginning though, minus the bass line. I used the drums kinda. But yeah the song, not really able to do much with that but I do see what you mean. I only used it cause it stays linear like you said with very little changes, and it sounded to me like it flowed pretty well, but like you said making transitions with it was just kinda random.


Thanks again though, I need to get an actual camera and film with that. Like film random things like everyone just chillin on their bikes, riding to spots, small things like that to add to the video. I always like how that stuff looks in videos but I never really bother doing that with my iPhone